Mo2men wrote:Thanks Mike for your great explanation with examples
In your article, you mentioned the following:
'When something uncountable increases, we also use also “more”', So do you think that the above example f Pacific Ocean should be;
The Pacific Ocean has a MORE depth than any other ocean.
if I want to use 'greater', it could be:
The depth of the Pacific Ocean is GREATER than the depth of any other ocean.What do you think?
Dear
Mo2men,
I'm happy to respond.
In your first sentence, the presence of the indefinite article is 100% wrong. It's one of these funny things about articles in English. Without the article, we have:
1)
The Pacific Ocean has more depth than that of any other ocean.
Technically, that is correct, but it sounds awkward, because "
more depth" is close enough to "
more deep," which is the incorrect form of "
deeper." Overall, that sentence sounds like an unnecessarily wordier version of this:
2)
The Pacific Ocean is deeper than any other ocean.
That version is a gem of clarity and concision, so #1 looks awkward by comparison.
It's funny. When we use "
greater" with the noun, we use the article, and the whole sentence sounds more sophisticated.
3)
The Pacific Ocean has a greater depth than that of any other ocean.
Again, it's funny: #2 is about as direct and concise as we could possibly convey this information, but this is a very plain way to say it. Any reasonably bright middle school student could say #2. By contrast, #3 has an air of sophistication: it's the way a professor might express the same idea in academic writing.
Your other sentence is correct.
4)
The depth of the Pacific Ocean is GREATER than the depth of any other ocean.
Notice that now, we are not talking about a countable or uncountable quantity---instead, we are talking about a number. Depth of an ocean is a number, a measurement, and for numbers we use "
greater" & "
less." Similarly,
5)
The depth of the Atlantic Ocean, at its deepest, is LESS than the depth of the deepest parts of the Pacific.
Of course, while that sentence is 100% grammatically correct, it's a bit wordy and indirect. An improvement would be
6)
The Atlantic Ocean, at its deepest, is not as deep as the deepest parts of the Pacific.
Does all this make sense, my friend?
Mike
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